Arrisquei-me a escrever meu primeiro conto em inglês...
Gloomy day
Light raindrops falling on the city on a cold and grey Sunday morning. The branches of the trees dancing in the wind and dry leaves falling on the ground, on a typical autumn day.
The gloom of the day became her own gloom. She decided to stay in bed little bit longer.
Nestled in her bed, she moved her eyes away from the window and her eyes met themselves. A mirror.
Looking deep into the mirror... she ceased to see a clear reflection of herself, the image became blurry...
Agradeço à mamãe Alice pela revisão da tradução!!
6 comentários:
e eu agradeço a Helô pela ajuda no ingles xD
muito bom amiga ... voce tem o dom ...
Parabens... e ai vai continuar o conto?
beijosss
amo vc
Gostei do conto, curto simples e direto, com conteúdo, e ainda me fez treina meu inglês =)
Great!
Very, very good!
A mystery's climate surrounding all the text!
It makes me think so much about all the sundays mornings of my life!
Conscious or unconsciously (?)...
I don't know to say for sure...
But about one thing I am sure:
Each day that has gone, I feel more proud of you!
Sorry, I think that I need to comeback to the English's classes!
It were terrible!
But I tried!
Kiss Honey!
P.S.: Congratulations to the vocabulary! Very refined. I had some problems to translate! But
nothing that a dictionary hadn't resolved!
"Raindrops keep fallin' on my head
And just like the guy whose feet are too big for his bed
Nothin' seems to fit
Those raindrops are fallin' on my head, they keep fallin' "
Lindo conto. Poucas palavras, muitas imagens nítidas na imaginagem de quem o lê.
bjo
ki fofoo migaa...identifiquei a personagem com alguém que conheço...!
auhaua...parabéns xuxu..auhaua..
amo vc baka...e como sempre..to orgulhosa a kda texto!
imagens bonitas, com um charme ainda maior em inlgês. parabéns.
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